The Fall
By Gracie
My bike wobbled. It whimpered. I skidded.
My eyes opened and a tear trickled down my face. My knees worried in agony. I saw Millie hurrying off, not realizing that I had stopped. I think she noticed that I’m wasn’t behind her because I heard her bike screech to a stop. I identified my bike crash onto the floor.
I finally realized... it’s game over. I had fallen...
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Tuesday 2 May 2017
The Fall
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nice one Gracie your story through shivers up my spine.
ReplyDeletePicture drawn in my head.
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True, I liked it as well and I agree it was cool to see you describe the feeling and what happened!!! NICE
DeleteTrue, I liked it as well and I agree it was cool to see you describe the feeling and what happened!!! NICE
Deletehi i like your writing
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